Jennafina

I didn't anticipate the ending, but I thaught it was funny. Its all happy and philosophical(sp?) and then BANG! oops, birds dead, lol.

I didn't even know what acrostic means untill chevy mentioned it in context. I didn't notice. I like the pendulum image and the man in the moon line. Save the ...

Thats nice and well written, a little emo for my taste though.. one thing.. "You don't look old enough to be out this early." "Either do you." do you mean ...

Sorry, didn't mean to breach topic. It was stupid, I hope I didn't offend anyone too badly. Its the alaska thing.. And my spelling ablilties are abismal, I know. Thanks ...

The sea of grey is good. Mine was pretty stupid, I was just throwing out radom ideas.

WOw thats the best! I love it! I love all the quick snappy rhymes, and how its dark but not neccessarily all slow and deap.

I like the format, thats cool. It sounds a little bit like an evenesence song, but its still really good. The only thing that seams a little out of place ...

I don't really understand the last line but I really like the rest. Its discriptive, but not to the point where its inposible to read.

Your poll looks good too, lol

I think its good, I dont know why no one else has comented. The chorus is a little repetiive, but im sure it doesn't sound that way when its sang.

WHAT? OMG UR A 40 YR OLD MAN?!?!?!?!?! OMG!!! heheh, jk, lol. There was a time in the middle where it had me a little bit convinced though. Thats really ...

Thats really good. I like its wistfullness, if thats a word. It reminds me of phantom of the opera.

The only good thing about this is that it lets everyone find out who is a democrat/republican. *Leaves before I get contaminated by all this bushism**Shudders at the thaught*

thats not lame, its funny!

This type of thing makes me depressed. I wish I could go to hogwarts and doo all this! Thats really really funny!