JennaLL

Ok well thanks for the comments; (“Where are you? I need to meet you”) - About putting punctuation after "you", I was told I was advised not to, so I ...

Thanks for the advice

Thanks KJ

The actual story is pretty poor but I quite like some of the description.

Eimear, Thanks, that's not harsh! That's honest. The idea just got me writing and I understand it needs a large amount of re-structuring. Your tips can help me to focus ...

This poem is really poigniant and the imagery is very powerful. I love the idea of the changing person and the rust underneath. It's great!

I really liked your description. I thought this story was very good and the concept was unique.