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  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Dramatic Re: Would you like to know how you died?

    I was very surprised by this story. I expected something way different when i read the title, but this was much better, This was a very intriguing read. I'm not ...

    Nov 28, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: ​Pup

    Hey! This poem is also very well done. This is the only part that bothered me: "I was my own master I was king I was my world I was ...

    Nov 20, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Xia - Prologue

    "Both great people with pathetic descendants; but they had something in common." maybe its just me, but i found this sentence a little weird. Only because they both have in ...

    Nov 20, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Literature Re: Stella Amor

    Hey there! I find latin a fascinating language as well. The book i'm writing uses a lot of latin. I'm glad someone else shares that same interest in the language. ...

    Nov 20, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Chasing the Sun - Prologue

    i love this Omi! It was very well written and very exciting. At first, it did sort of remind me of the Hunger Games, but once i got to the ...

    Nov 20, 2013
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: A Bad Day for Pooh Bear

    Hey there:) This is an interesting story. i realize, your a beginner so i will go easy on you.:) I like how this story tells us the relationship of two ...

    Nov 20, 2013
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: Time Of Our Lives.

    Hey! This is a great bit of writing. I myself don't write realistic genre stories, because that isn't my thing, but this is great. I don't find it nessecary to ...

    Nov 19, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Spiritual Re: Stand Strong

    hey there! This is a wonderful poem. When reading this I knew instantly it was about God. There were I few spelling mistakes such as "But through You grace" it ...

    Nov 18, 2013


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