Jen_Li_Ha

as the Vicar said "This place is far from holy, all is cursed and belongs to the wicked." in other words, this church is not blessed by God, so it's ...

thanks sweetheart it helps alot with those grammar checks, since english ain't my first language :wink: and no worries, sir knight likes attention so of course he will get some, ...

It's nice to see that you can make so few sentences into something so deep and mysterious. I really liked it :D

But my dear friend, what you just mentioned about the servant makes me happy, you're a good reader and I, well i'm a teaser. I want my readers to think, ...

oh boy, you're insane! :shock: I'm so super happy for real, so writing that would be easy, in a boring way :wink: I want to write dark stuffs, because it's ...

oh my, never expected to get this much feedback :shock: thank you everyone and I will have a little look at some grammars and such and maybe fix it up ...

oh my, you made me giggle a bit. :wink: I know that it might sound a bit over the top, but this man is so powerful that he actually rips ...

souldier, I must admit I don't really understand what you mean, because the thing is, there's one person telling this little "story" a flashback, that's why I only used quotations ...

I'm not fond of blood and gore... but you made it wickedly cool :twisted: