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I really liked this. Characterization was awesome, as were the voices. I can so easily see all three of these boys existing. And I might have developed an illogical attachment ...

Mwahaha, horaay for my evil spread of generator sites! Ahem. I mean, I'm glad you made use of the site. It's awesome, isn't it? The Reunion: I liked the narrator's ...

Woah... awesomely, awesomely good. Officially jealous of your plottage skill. Of course, I'm jealous of everybody's plottage skills, but that's neither here nor there. I liked how it was a ...

Hi. This is nice and has an interesting idea behind it, but you have some grammatical errors and skipping around in tenses. I'll note everything that I've picked up, but ...

This fit both the emotion and the song really well. I liked the beginning and how it made me wonder what was going on at first. Its length is fine ...

I like this, the descriptions are nice (particularly the first paragraph) and I'm looking forward to reading more if you post it. It's an intriguing first look, what with character ...

Hi. I really like this poem. The simplicity of the style matches the subject so well. One thing, in the first lines of the first two stanzas, wouldn't the verb ...

*stares* I'm trying to come up with things to say. Wow. I love this. It's beyond beautiful. Really. The imagery is lovely, vocabulary is fantastic, semantics are perfect as far ...

Hi! First off, you write description beautifully. This had an easy flow. I like the contrasting paragraphs in the beginning in particular. Okay, you might not need this warning, but ...

A BOLD piece indeed. I like the decision to use the capitalization, how it powerfully emphasizes words. The poem is, I suppose the best word to describe it is empowering. ...

Interesting set-up. There's some issues with punctuation (mostly lack of commas) that you should look into, but I don't think I saw anything else in terms of spelling/grammar. Also, maybe ...

Mwahaha, evil dictators for the win! Ahem. Good word choice/phrasing, as I sometimes find poems of these type to be a little too straightforward. But this has you know, specifics, ...

Hm... not too much I can say about this that hasn't already been expressed. But I figure since this is just that great, it deserves another full review of gushing. ...

Greetings! :) So, I can definitely identify with this poem. I think a lot of people can. I like the simple style because it lets the meaning shine through clearly, ...

Yay, awesome first chapter. As I expressed in the prologue, I love your idea of having a fantasy story set in Africa. I'm excited to see how fantasy is going ...