JediDeadpool

*wipes sweat off brow* Thank goodness. Perhaps now I'll be able to sleep at night

Please note that Fangirldivergent46 was incredibly helpful, and came up with about half of this, if not more. Also please note we may or may not intend on making more ...

AHHHHHHH!!! WHY IS THIS STILL IN THE GREEN ROOM! The sad part is I can't even review this :'(

a| while | la | ter | drif| ted| up is only 7 syllables :P ('while' is only one syllable)

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:o Don't you have to believe I heaven to go there..?

I like it that you think it's a bit flawed, due to the subject of it. But I've never wanted to pick up a story and hug it and pet ...

Please excuse my obsessive love-rant of your piece. I looked at it objectively after writing it and realized it was ridiculous. I then submitted it anyways There come times (all ...

I think it would make sense if you said "no-color-on-face" policy

Any time :)

Feel free to! I appreciate the reviews, and I'm glad you got something from my works. :P

Barrels are just the place all the negativity poured on people is put. Some people have strong mentors and friends who take some of the 'rocks' out and throw them ...

Thanks, glad you liked it! :) I have a couple other 'clever' poems if you'd like to check them out!

But up above he knows I'll edit this because looking back it is pretty vague, but it symbolizes that he's "up above it all" in heaven. Or at least, whatever's ...

As always, thanks for the awesome review! Always great to see your feedback. Apologies. I assumed if I checked the language box that was as much as I should do. ...