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Women are drugs.... only thing wrong that stands out to me is "cross to bear" I dunno why The looks women give can either make or break you that's for ...

Very well written, I enjoyed how you focused on a rather grizzly point of slaves but made it seem acceptable for at the time it was. I enjoy history alot ...

The feels :( makes me think of how much I miss my Dad. I enjoyed this a lot my Dad stayed with us as a single parent. He said he ...

Hey whats up I am also new here buddy. I'm gonna start off by saying I applaud the lack of punctuation. It's the words that matter I hardly use commas ...

I like how the poem was about gen 1. My favorite line has to be "To me you're number one, just like Bulbasaur" It just stood out to me the ...

I like the feelings behind the poem. Keep in mind to try and not force words to rhyme, just because it's a poem doesn't mean it has to rhyme. Girls ...

I enjoyed this a lot! I envy your ability to write stories and such as I cannot seem to put it all together. All the characters introduced so far have ...