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Re: Earth Driven-Prologue
I can't see any problems except maybe just profread and make sure you explained everything so the reader knows what your talking about!:)I like it alot!
Nov 27, 2010 -
Re: Can You See Me? (Chapter One)
This is a great story!I like that you added some humor!I couldn't see a whole lot of problems that other people haven't already seen!So the only advice I can give ...
Nov 27, 2010 -
Re: The Double Life: Chapter 2-The Breakout
That helps alot!Ill remember to add emotion!:)
Nov 26, 2010 -
Re: The Double Life: Chapter 2-The Breakout
The Second Chapter to mt story! Tell me what you think please!
Nov 25, 2010 -
Re: The Double Life Chapter 1: The Past and the Present
I have published the other 2 chapters to another cite for young writers, so if you want the link to see them here it is: It will attomaticoly go to ...
Nov 24, 2010 -
Re: The Double Life Chapter 1: The Past and the Present
Thank-]you everyone for the feedback and support! I just have to get enough points then I will post the next chapter!:)
Nov 24, 2010 -
Re: Caught in the Waves
I like this! It's really interesting and it really hooked me in! The only thing that I could see was that you might want to make your diffrent days more ...
Nov 21, 2010 -
Re: Deep Magic Part 1
You have great writing potential like it a lot !You should try publishing! Check out mine it’s called The Double Life!
Nov 21, 2010 -
Re: Brooklyn Bridge falls
You have great writing potential like it a lot !You should try publishing! Check out mine it’s called The Double Life!
Nov 21, 2010