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JaymeBurrows

  • Poetry » Romantic, Other Re: To my dearest one

    Absolutely exquisite! I'm glad to find some poetry that has a refreshing, antique touch. It honesty brings me back to a time where romance was real and in these days, ...

    Oct 18, 2017
  • Short Story » Horror, Fantasy Re: opening draft of my story

    It's incredible! Sucked in within the first few seconds! It's incredible how much happened in such little time yet with perfect transition. And in harsh honesty I got irritated when ...

    Oct 15, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: 4 am chats

    The honesty in these words. I love that I can actually relate. Falling in love and seeing them as perfect in their imperfections and only being able to hope they ...

    Oct 15, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: A Gryphon's Tail Chapter 3: Alone in the forest

    Incredible! I felt like I was actually there. I love the involvement and you have a skill for sucking readers in. I always enjoy a story that drags me in. ...

    Oct 15, 2017


The grand in the hotel rings with broken tunes; the guests frown; the concierge winces. But the blue-hatted boy is happy and braver than they.
— TheMythMaster