JayeCShore

Exalted crap! Your reviews are amazing. Honestly, I should be paying you to do this. The way you review is, in and of itself, a work of art. Thank you ...

The narrator is supposed to be stiff. He's cynical, hard, heady minded, and entirely sure of himself. There's a lot that gets revealed about him later on that makes more ...

I agree completely that this chapter's paragraphs and dialogue are a bit of a jumble. This was one that I re-wrote several times, and still don't like that much. Sometimes ...

My lack of contractions was and is deliberate. I decided to write this book that way because I wanted it to feel a little more formal, which is to say, ...

What you mentioned first, I sort of agree with. I threw that in there because I heard a similar line in a song, and thought it was interesting. As for ...

Well, you definitely interpreted it right. Even I had no idea what I was doing ;P As for the "white people," it's racist against people in general. White People meaning ...

Kanome, what's the point of a review if you're not reviewing? "I don't see how it is majorly 'dark." Really? This poem is about as dark as it gets. It's ...

The "when push and atom meets shove" part is deliberate, and I thought a lot about it. "When push comes to shove" is a common idiom, as you probably know, ...

Well, I've crafted that style to be that style. To me, it holds more meaning. but I understand.

I hope to read more. Gosh dang it! Write faster!

I understand that you didn't enjoy my style very much, and may have found it confusing. That's just how I write, and it's what I like to read. As for ...

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Sorry, posted this twice on accident.

Wow, that's cool.

Forgot to like this :D

Once again, I'm blown away by your review. Heck, sometimes I think my characters all mash themselves together and become a unit of monotone drones. But, apparently, that's not the ...