Jassie

Ahhh first story? This is going to be a long review, but I hope you take this advice :] I noticed in a lot of places that your descriptions were ...

That is really good. It's honestly a poem I would print out and tape inside my locker haha~ I'm the first to post and I think I know why.. maybe ...

Wow. That was powerful. I feel like you have so much potential to be a truly great author. Your descriptions were so amazing, I could picture the entire scene in ...

Many people who are interested in writing or have taken creative writing classes either in high school OR college might know one very important rule in writing a good book: ...

Ooooo I really like your poem. It's deep! But if you don't mind my criticism, it seemed like you were trying to rhyme the words sometimes but then you didn't ...