Jashael

"disillusionment went lurking around". (Hey! Wasn't that personification? XD ) what does it add to your poem? Disillusionment is running around, cool but so what? Make the connections. But it ...

So Mr. Silented is too shy to post here. XD I'm sorry! But I'm posting my answers here and sending you the link. I have to answer them in case ...

Okay, so Mom, I decided to review this; but the one, humongous block of words totally pulled me out of the reviewer's impulse. Aww...will it be too much to ask ...

Thanks for the likes guys! Greatly appreciated! =D/

I wasn't just sure about the line where there was "somes"; I googled and none came up. So you should probably tell me what it is. LOL Anyway, good job. ...

So I was disappointed that it wasn't serious. LOL Anyway, nice one. I won't be reviewing now. XD

Hey guys! You don't know how much boost you've given to me by your comments. Thank you so much for giving this the time. XD I really appreciate each one. ...

I am in everyway totally jealous. That's great! Especially since I haven't read a chapter of your novel in my life. Well, I think I will disappoint you. O_o

Okay, so I really needed to break this into two posts, 'cause today was a busy day blah blah...had to do a lot of errands. Anyway, I'm back, so I'm ...

EPIC EPIC EPIC EPIC!!! Dragon, you're one of the best! LOL I can't believe I only saw this like, right now...hahah! And I'm in it!WHOPP! you deserve a bunch of ...

And about your characters, the thoughts and opinions that came from your MC's perspective are good actually although some of it are a bit confusing. But sometimes you should try ...

You're smart for this! ;) You got it the idea and I love you for that.LOL Patricia's character is really well-developed -- the best of all the characters in the ...

Road! May I please request something before I continue my review? Can you please post it whole? I read that this is only the start. May I please read it ...

TIGER RAWR! hahaha... Honestly, I love your review, I've even altered my manuscript! BUUUUT some were, I'm sorry, but if I followed your advices on Yuenish's PURPLE PROSE...well, my character ...

Hey, Bick. I'm back. =)) NITPICKS AND COMMENTS Correction. Pay attention. Better this way. >> A pack of rowdy young men always congregated outside them, and they enjoy ed throwing ...