Jashael

Oh, I've just read romantic short stories. I'm warning you though, I'm not a fan of gay stories. Sorry...sooo yeah. Don't worry. I'm not biased. I'll only tell you, if ...

Hey, girl. I'm back for the next part. XD I'm sorry if I'm more of a reviewer of structure and grammar-errrr. LOL But I'll give you an overall opinion later. ...

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Thanks to all who're liking this. XD Oh, and yo SHeri! of course, you can! Just click on the "LISTEN" =)) It'll lead you to Muziboo, where there's an mp3 ...

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This is so cool, girl! =) It was light to read, fun to read. =) The rhythm was a bit longer at some lines, but twas all fine. =)) Good ...

Yuriiko, that's "I had always brought in my bag..." and "mine in" meant to grope inside a cabinet. XD Sarreh 'bout those...I'll rephrase the others. Flow, Thanks for the comments! ...

Skinsy! Take yerr time. =)) Hey, Mom! Thanks so much for the early review. XD Oh, and I was writing this spontaneously last night (finally had time after weeks of ...

P.S. the only thing I didn't like was the gay part. I didn't find anything in it. I just felt like it was a blank space to fill up and ...

GRAMMAR/STRUCTURE Hey, Angela, so you're really good with putting in realistic dialogue, and descriptions were fairly good. The only things that kept on bugging me was obviously the paragraphs structu

Angela, first, I'm going to have to apologize for my slow reviewing. I've been busy with my life (LOL), and SB. XD But I'm here again now. =) And I'm ...

thanks guys! =D/

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So I saw this featured. XD I'll get to it as soon as I can.

Jen! Thanks so much for the review! XD Strikes reality, I guess meant that her guess was verified? =)) It struck reality. Like, was right." then she frowns. *pouts* Then ...