Jashael

Thanks, Kaf... oh great nitpicker. :D I'm glad to have you review this. :D

My parents have posted!!! YAY! Mom, yes...maybe we could put up some clue, eh? =) But still, I'm a bit confused with that...'cause in the end, well, the MC said ...

hey guys. thanks so much. :)

whoever liked this: wow...thanks! :D

WHOOO!!! Very helpful, Icy!!!! Love you so much. ;**

First off, I think the story itself is touching and sweet, but a little unbelievable, mostly regarding Andy. I realize we don't know much about him, since our knowledge is ...

....Okay, pretend you're a police officer now. A young, thirteen year old girl runs into the station, she's yelling frantically, she has cuts and bruises, and I assume she'd be ...

Thanks, Inbetweener! :)

If you have any questions regarding the short review, and if you ever need a review again, just drop by my wall. :)

Here's the next post! L-D COLOR CODE: NITPICKS | ADDED | CHANGED | PAY ATTENTION I had not yet seen myself in a mirror, but I could make out that ...

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I guess since you've changed so much of this, I'll have to re-review. I don't even remember where I've stopped. And even if I base that on my previous posts, ...

I actually want to finish this after the contest. LOL I had meant for it to be about 5000 words. But was too busy. Anyway. Thanks so much, Jen! :)

It was so short! : O I so do not write like this. HAHAHA

I can't believe how much I babbled. :p