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Hi! So first and foremost, I liked this plot idea. :) I don't understand why she would give a random little girl money, then just abandon her in the bathroom ...

Hey, I can't really review this because even if there was anything wrong, it was covered by the raw beauty of this piece. It was really amazing. I'm so interested ...

Hey, Sorry for not reviewing sooner, I forgot to check the Will Review for Food forum. Anyway, Questions: I normally have a lot for short stories but I only found ...

This may be a crazy guess...but he's dead right? :) I liked this but as I said in my first review, it just went on and on with the descriptions! ...

Hey there, I liked this. It kind of reminded me of this great book called, After by Francine Prose, for some reason. I think your story was really interesting and ...

I liked this. I thought it would be something completely different (I don't even want to say it, that's how far off I was). I hope your continuing with this, ...

hahahahahaha!! *wipes tears from eyes* I loved this! Really great job! My favorite part: If somebody killed Thor’s uncle, I guarantee you he wouldn’t embark on some “emotional journey of ...

Aww. This was one of those bittersweet stories. I think you should have explained the girl's features a bit more and not as much the mucus, blood thing. You overused ...

I can't give you an actual review because it would be unfair but I really liked this, a bit creepy at the end. :) ~Jasmine Bells~ Peace, Love, Writing, Insanity, ...

OH. MY. GOD. THIS WAS THE BEST THING IN THE UNIVERSE!!!!!!!!!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LAUGHED MY *ARSE* OFF WHILE READING THIS!!!! AHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!! AHHH!!!!

Epic Win right there. I love the title. Question: If his eyes are lifeless, how are they looking at the sea? :) ~Jasmine Bells~ Peace, Love, Writing, Chocolate, Valentines Day ...

hey, I haven't seen many stories that have to do with Iraq or the war (if this is what it is about) on this website lately. The very end shouldn't ...

I have to say I love this. I'm not just saying that like I *shamefully* admit I do to other authors to sugarcoat my harsh reviews! I always liked in ...

Whoa. That was creepy but in a good way. Wow. That kind of scared me actually. One point, this boy would have been dead from starvation and dehydration long before ...

Hey Dark, So I thought this was a good plot with a nice twist at the end but like PepsiCola I think that you should have a bit more of ...