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Re: Odd Girl Out
Hey, I really liked this piece. You captured the voice of a little girl very well, though I didn't understand the prompt you were told to work with. :p One ...
Feb 2, 2011 -
Re: A Single Sentence Saved My Life
Hey, I applaud you for being able to write in such a difficult characters voice. This is a pretty taboo topic and to be able to pull it off, it ...
Feb 2, 2011 -
Re: Not a home
Hey, I like this. At first I was like, 'Aw this is gonna suck and I'm going to have to write a review and blabber about nonsense' and then I ...
Jan 29, 2011 -
Re: Say My Name
Hey, This is really cute piece. I'm not very good at reviewing poetry (Actually, I'm not very good at reviewing in general), but I'll take a shot. It had an ...
Jan 29, 2011 -
Re: Teenage Love Story
Lol, the song is "All the right moves", I think. I think that this was okay at best, but could have been about 1000 times better. Their love was very ...
Nov 2, 2010 -
Re: The Boy Who Kissed My Hand: A Monologue
I just read it and am amazed at your awesomeness. Like honestly. I think that at parts this was a little awkward but obviously, it's a monologue and reading it ...
Oct 21, 2010 -
Re: Don't butter my toast
Hey, I totally suck at reviewing poetry but I'd like you to see this, because it was the first thing I thought of when I saw the title: By the ...
Oct 9, 2010 -
Re: Her Molten Core - Chapter 1 (16+)
Hey, I should be getting to school so this'll be a short one. At first, when I read the title I didn't notice how it said 'Chapter 1" because I ...
Oct 5, 2010 -
Re: Hello, my name is.
Hey, The thing that drew me to this was the fact that I have a prologue of a long-forgotten novel with the same title. I loved the first line of ...
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: It's The Muggle Way, Dumbledore
Hey, XDDDD. This was great!! I'm pretty sure it's going to end up featured! Okay notes: 1. Dumbledore is the most powerful wizard ever. Obviously, he could have Oblivioused "Ms. ...
Sep 22, 2010 -
Re: Dear Friend,
Hey, "I repeat again, so you don’t feel bad, but you didn’t break my heart. I did." That was my favorite line. This was really sweet and made me a ...
Sep 21, 2010 -
Re: This Poem of Cliches
Hey, Haha! That was funny :) At times the flow was a little rough (They've always been such hated things,All they wanted was to feel the fame,that being fresh and ...
Sep 20, 2010 -
Re: Respite (Mockingjay spoilers)
Gah! I can't believe he died. It was so horrific. Screw Prim and Madge, I want Finnick back!! Great story, maybe a bit short. :D I don't like to give ...
Sep 4, 2010 -
Re: A Shot of Arrogance (Chapter Eight ~ Part One)
Oh My Peanut Butter. That was amazing. :) The flow was good and you kept me excited but I think you put Oliver's name way to much in the dialogue. ...
Sep 3, 2010 -
Re: The end
Hey, I liked this. As Retro said, you pushed us into the end and somehow it worked. I know you've written way more than this and I think that you ...
Sep 1, 2010