Jared

Thank you. Might I suggest you include some sort of preface that notes that this was specifically written that way? I wouldn't say I wasted my time by reviewing this, ...

Thank you for your nitpicks. I, like any writer, make many mistakes and just glance over them when going through the editing process. I am glad to have multiple reviews ...

Yes, I shall be creating a new installment within a few days. I can tell you when it comes out.

Well, I'm writing an actual novel right now, and this might become part of it somehow. Thanks again for your review.

Thank you for these comments. Yes, this is bordering on purple prose. I believe it would have been better had I called this "random" and not acted like it should ...