JaneThermopolis

I do agree with a lot of the other reviews; I think that the whole plot of this snippet was really confusing and I wasn't sure what everything was happening ...

Wow, I thought these haikus were great. It's very hard to review haikus, because they're so short, but I'll try to point out all the things I did and didn't ...

Wow, this is pretty good! I don't usually try to be bias by people's ages on here but for an 11 year old this is an absolutely phenomenal piece of ...

I liked this piece, and I have to say I loved how you incoporated Ye Olde English into the poem. I love those old Shakesperian words. Your poem is actually ...

Ummm...I'm a bit confused. This is really short, and it really has no plot at all. It just seems like an excerpt from maybe a much broader story. All we ...

Robert Frost is some silly old man? Geesh! - Just kidding. I love how you incorporated Aquainted With The Night in this piece, it's one of my favorite Frost poems! ...

Interesting, creepy story! I'm hoping you'll post the next part soon! Anyways I have a couple nitpicks to pick out, but they're mostly grammatical and/or spelling related ones. The gunshot ...

Wow, this was definitely a really promising beginning. I can't wait to read the next parts. Moving on, this story really made me sad. I didn't cry, but this was ...

I also agree with Bond Girl! What the heck is this poem about. I was reading and there was so many different ideas that it just confused me. So she ...

I thought this was a cute story, also it seemed to me very whimsical with all the comets, stars, etc. As BondGirl said the end dialogue doesn't really flow very ...

Wow...that was, what's the word.....hmmmmmmmmm........ Well I'm going to come up with a word for this story. Creepsanesity - definition: Creepy, insanity,and pure madness. That is basically what your

The worst book I've ever read...Inside the Mind of Gideon Rayburn by Sarah Miller. It's about this boy (Gideon) who ends up going to this private boarding school where his ...

I agree with a lot of what the other reviewers said. Here are some things I really want to point out. 1. The grammar is pretty bad. I have the ...

I thought this was a very awesome story, makes you think about what life would be like if this and this happened. What if kids ALWAYS ate their vegetables and ...

Like perdido said, this poem is just kind of mediocre. I do however have some nitpicks to point out, and some things I liked a lot. Who? What? When? Where? ...