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"Liked" this! Honestly, you summarized it so well. When you're having your period, you just want relief as soon as possible, and you were able describe it so well that ...

I LOVED this, and obviously everyone else loved it just as much too because it is on the front page. Ergo, it's brilliant. You took a novel and easily shrunk ...

Hi GrayLady, You said this was your first story, and I'm actually impressed. I found that you're writing flowed throughout the piece, and that's particularly impressive, especially being 13. However, ...

So overall I thought this poem was definitely meaningful. However, I thought the 'thee's and 'thou's were kind of odd. The rest of poem is written in a more modern ...

I also agree with the others. This was a very beautiful story that I think most girls and some guys can relate to. LIsa is especially characterized well and I ...

I agree with a lot of what Lillian said, it's very cute and as a girl who would really adore the type of boy you described in this poem, I ...

I'm impressed! Very beautiful poem! It's amazing that it flows so well and is pretty visual. One of my favorite lines is: "Stories that words will never tell, are told ...

Despite the typo that Snoink pointed out, Poem #1 is so much better than Poem #2. I like the use of the italics, the way you had this 'artist' telling ...

I really loved this poem! Honestly, it had no hidden message or anything behind it, but I still thought the poem itself was written beautifully. You did a good job ...

Navita was correct in saying this story was chilling. Because it was kind of scary because the reader pretty much knows what's going to happen, but you described the Holocaust ...

Oh, wow. I really loved this piece. I think you explained your situation well. One of my favorite lines is this one (lol I don't want to quote it): The ...

I actually really enjoyed this poem, but I do agree with you when you said it was repetative. You basically split your different ideas into three line segments, right? At ...

I'm really impressed. You did a good job describing Alyss well and I can't wait to see how you develop her throughout the story. Not only did you have a ...

I love, love, love this!!!! And apparently everyone else does too! Congrats on having 50 likes! (which is actually going to turn to 51 after I post this reply.) Nothing ...

I really liked your essay! I thought it was informative, and you definitely taught the reader a few things about the history of women's suffrage. A couple nitpicks though: Women ...