JaneAusten

I love this poem. It reminds you to take a look around and notice God's wonderful creation and not to take it for granted. Thanks so much for the reminder!

Wow that is really good. It really shows what goes on in life. I think it would be cool to make a story out of this but this is really ...

Again all I have to say is wow. You are really good at describing this. You are a really gifted writer with a passion for God witch is amazing!!!! I ...

Thanks, I appreciate you reading it. All of you.

I changed the bible verses at the end of this poem I think theses fit better than Micah 6:8. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!

Thanks so much for the input!!! I hope my paper will get an ok grade at the least!!! I had to hand it in today.

After reading that I really don't have a good reply. I love it. Just remember God is always there for you!

Everyone keeps saying things about how cheesy it was, but I understood it. Ok, guess I might be like the only one but I liked it, even the "cheesy" parts.

I have nothing to try to fix or anything. You don't realize how much this made me laugh. I love it!!!!!! This could be a story, too.