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Okay yes that helps a lot. Thanks. You're a lot of help. And I guess I've been reading too much Fear Street lately; in those books the poor kids that ...

Okay thanks everyone. I know it must have taken a while to get through this, and I appreciate it. I don't know if I'll be able to rewrite before the ...

Hahaha. That's a col idea. I might atually write that. :D I disagree about that Ali. If the song is abotu drug use then why did the Solomon elementary 4th ...

Haha! I know, that's pretty much everything I intended it to be. And just for the record, Sean volunteered to be the leprechaun, and it's Pinkdom, not Ponyville. Ha! Sorry, ...

Okay thanks. Like I said, I won't be able to work on this for a while, but all the feedback will help when I can get back to it.

Okay thanks. That was a lot of help. I'll keep these in mind, but it may be a while before I get to work on this one again. :)

Thanks Ali, for your true nit-picking talents. I'll keep the comments in mind. This novel is on a halt though, until I finish The Love Note. I've just been wanting ...

Comments in red Bobby waits outside the room, rubbing his hands together. The doctor’s been there for over an hour, stepping out every once in a while, asking for towels, ...

Come on people. I need reviews! Please?

Okay thanks for the review. And the three years before part would probably make more sense if you read the in-progress-novel it goes with. I get that whole name thing ...

No, not too harsh at all. It was a lot of help. :) Thanks for everything, though I can't rewrite just yet what with school back up and working on ...

Okay, thanks. Again with the typos. :( I think I got all of them this though. I'm working on chapter three, but it won't be postable for another few weeks ...

Okay thanks. I'm not so sure I'm going to correct the grammar problems in the dialog because I don't know very many teens that use proper grammar, but the rest ...

Thanks for the reviews. I'll be working on chapter two a lot more so those chnages probably won't be made for a while.

Thanks. And about the paper, I would tell you what it said, but I'm romantically challenged and don't have a clue what to write in a love note.