JakAnthony

Mate, I've seen people slashed with keys.

Is this about cloth or something like that? Because it seems strikingly obvious to me but nobody seems to be mentioning it in the comments. And if it is not ...

This is pretty much exactly what I was going to say.

#DoIt

Thanks for the review. I get what you mean, I wrote this late at night (I finished it at 12 on a school night), so a lot of it is ...

Quite liked this. It was funny but also had some touching story. Really liked the political jokes. And that's about it to be honest. If you were going to improve ...

oh, cheers.

I like this. It's a nice set-up for an interesting plot, with a interesting wee set of characters. I'm glad I read it.

Thanks, but no need for the pm, I've figured it out on my own. Decided to bump it up to 16 , because there will be more real swear words, ...

Thanks for the comments, I'm glad you liked it! Describing the surroundings is a huge weakness of mine and I'm trying to work on it. Can you clarify what you ...

Thanks for the feedback. By the way, it was a magic hologram, but I can see that that really wasn't clear. Also, how do I change the age rating, and ...