JakAnthony

That was smashing. And I don't just say that to anyone. That is really good. The whole idea behind it is possibly the most original I have ever seen, and ...

This is very good. Good setting, good characters, and I can see a plot forming from this. A good way to tell if someone knows what they are doing with ...

This was pretty class. That is really the only way I can describe it. Amazing plot, great main character and I really love the whole vengeance/rescue mission thing. It's a ...

Loved this. Really good writing from the offset, not a lot of description, but that helped to keep the dream-like setting. I have been subject to these kind of half-nightmares ...

Oh my God. Just wow. This was brilliant. Like, proper brilliant. Really good plot line, really good characters and having the main character tell the story to her little brother ...

Hi. This is a great story, with probably the best writing I have seen on this site so far. I am also quite fan of the X-men franchise, and I ...

I quite liked this. And I usually really hate poems that don't rhyme, because I think they look like an awkward, half-hearted attempt. But this was good. The rhythm flowed ...

Hi. This wasn't too bad. I liked how you explained things from the view of the wolf. There were a number of minor issues, but the one thing that really ...

Hey, really loved this opening. You developed your characters straight away and hinted at the main plot whilst keeping the mystery. I especially loved all the seemingly pointless details towards ...

Over all, very well written with a nice plot. The whole thing about the flame was genius. Although, I think it more touches on the theme, rather than captured it. ...