Jadefox

sory i jus mystip alot. oooops. I'm just kidding! Although, I even looked up how to spell florescent on Dictionary.com. My English teacher says grammatical errors are my worst problem ...

Hey, Thanks for the review, I really needed a more constructive criticism. I'll be sure to change a few things in Chapter two. I haven't been working on this story ...

Thanks! Yes Ebony's family is dead, I didn't want to go into a lot of detail with her history because it really isn't related to the plot or story.

Thanks! Yes Ebony's family is dead, I didn't want to go into a lot of detail with her history because it really isn't related to the plot or story.

Great job on details, no matter how gory they are. You have my attention. Please continue. -jadefox