JackpotJohnson

My topic: Your Story Is About A Psychologist In A Futristic Space Station Destorying New York City

Thanks, for the Great feedback. It's nice to meet you to. I noticed to that I really need to make some meat on these barebones, because you're right, I need ...

I will definitely PM you when more is written, Thank you for your words of advice. I noticed that as well after I posted. This is just my rough draft ...

Thank you for your great advice. I will use this information in the future for my benifit.....This is will make writing sci-fi much easier. Also for Bao-boa's name I wanted ...

Like they said it was a good start...

Anyone else????

Thank's so much....I'll take a look at what I can do to fix the story

Just a rough draft...anyone got comments or concerns?

I like it.....its good

Good...I liked it..i would provide constructive criticism but what i needed to say was already said. :D Good Job!!

Its good...Real good, however i have to agree with the others...other than that it was good

Thank you both for your critique's and ideas. I will use your ideas and apply them to future stories. Again thank you both.