JackBauerHasABaldSpot

if you copied this and handed it out to all the Twilighters at my school they would shoot you. They are diehard twilight fans. I tried the read the books ...

Actually, it made more sense before I sliced it down. It's explained more with the added part, but I agreed with Max that it was too long. You're right about ...

Note: Until further notice, this is it. I guess everyone's just going to have to burrow back into the books (why not? Maybe it'll annoy me enough to start another ...

Hey, either you like it or you don't, but in all fairness, I did put in two warnings for Stephenie Meyer fans. And hey, at least criticize while you put ...

*trying very very hard to remember who J is but can't* Jasper Hale. loved it! but one thing, who is R? Rosalie Hale.

Thanks, LC. I don't know if Jerry's into Elizabeth as much as you might think, but I like your comment on reality. Though, how it plays into this story I'm ...

Thank you very much for the praise (esp. you Sassy!). I know how hard it is to get comments like these, especially in comedies, but I'd really like some more ...

All that aside, it was very funny and very different! :) It makes a change from all the other 102862829 romances you read out there. Good! :D Your critique pretty ...

I know it sounds incomplete. That's why I wrote another version. I don't think I should have kept up the whole Molly thing for too long. This was just a ...

Thank you, and the Stick World thanks you (and that's saying something, because they're a TOUGH crowd!). I think I'll do better on my errors on the other version of ...

Thanks, but I doubt I'll be continuing, and to tell you the truth, I didn't think ANYONE was going to like this! Pretty much everyone likes Stephenie Meyer! Even guys!

Er...hem...rated 'R' for language and slight mature themes, right? I think the f-word warrants that. Just fixed it. And thank you. Your comment alone is motivation for me to continue ...

p.s.- hahaha people know your name now jk jk jk lol. bye :)! They already know me as Mr. JB, or Jack, my FPIC! Much appreciated, see ya at Mr. ...

Again, comments to me are the rough online equivalent of gold, on this website, at least. Perhaps if such a thing as love existed so powerfully in human form, I ...

Some parts in the second chapter actually don't make sense and there's still a small bit of description to be made between sections. Other than that, it's engrossing enough. To ...