JackBauerHasABaldSpot

First of all, I think you've hit a good target in twisting up the old tale of Cinderella so that the overlooked background can be examined (just because Disney tells ...

Well, this is something I thought I'd never see: a Twilight fanfic I actually like! Most of the ones I've seen aren't shameful, just okay. This one was pretty interesting. ...

I really really enjoyed this, more than any story currently on here. To me, it has a very "Stargirl" feel to it, but it is refreshingly different. Instead of thinking ...

I like this, but it is certainly not void of error. However, kudos for the pacing and the restraint on info-dumping. Compared to some stories I've seen, yours stands out. ...

I noticed that your first paragraph's first three sentences start out the exact same way: Waking up...Removing... You're doing the "Sitting up, he was whatever" sentences that I see often ...

I don't know if I can agree with you there...Pride and Prejudice is certainly her most famous work, but I don't think it's her best. In my opinion, it's the ...

You know, this was not bad, really! Not that I intend to put down other posters on this forum, but this appeals to me in a way. Yes, we've seen ...

I used to like the series a bit, but after my sister said she liked it, I decided that reading them was enough. No praise, no nada. I just hate ...

I like it. Short, sweet, and (most of all) it doesn't have a stupid title that sounds marginally cute yet has nothing to do with the story (guilty, personally!). I ...

I've been trying to get to it and...well, finally! Anyway. Since the grammar issues appear to be sorted out, let's get on to the writing... I don't really like it ...

It's obviously about racism, but I like to think that it's also about courage even in the face of so much fear. I didn't really cry at the Tom Robinson ...

Okay, just as a side note, unless you're going to post these chapters all in one post, please don't do it all in one day. It's against the rules to ...

This isn't me being mean, it's just me being honest. You need a lot more than what you've got down. Yes, you've got a few grammatical errors, and that's excusable, ...

Well, the whole "victim" thing is a first. It's something Harlequin writers and Danielle Steel like to use a lot. It sends a message that the character is always stronger ...

Yes, it is a very good book, but call me too optimistic: I liked Bradbury's book much more for the ending, which certainly presents a much more hopeful view. Though ...