JabberHut

Hey, Mistress! I'm here as I said I would be. ^_^ Seeing as the grammar looks covered, I'll skip to my general thoughts about this. ^^ Mkay, I have never ...

Hey, JC! =D Seeing as quite a few people covered grammar, I'm going to see if I can touch on some deeper areas. ^^ Ooh, I Wonder What Will Happen ...

Hey, June! Sorry for the wait (even though it wasn't much of a wait). I had some distractions to tend to. xD Grammar and First Impressions He was the smallest ...

Hey, Kylan! ^_^ First reaction: This is so Mr. Amazing. xD Second reaction: This is really awesome. So. I thought this song was pretty incredible. It's not a typical song ...

Hey, Connie! =D Grammar and First Impressions The leopard began to tense up its muscles to pounce on Creep. Just say the leopard tensed. I think we tried to hard ...

Hey, Easy! I didn't get to this yesterday like I wanted, but I didn't get to a lot of things either. xD Anyway. *hums A Whole New World * Grammar ...

Hey, Connie! =D Must mend my state of boredom with this critique. ^_^ Grammar and First Impressions In the bounds of sleep Creep found himself standing on a wide, black ...

Hi, angels! =D Dialogue Is Silly... ...But it's important, and because it's so important, we need it to make sense. That means we need correct punctuation. Snoink wrote an article ...

Hello again! =D Grammar and First Impressions Creep slipped out of the back alley, a black shadow upon a white tableau. Didn't you just end Chapter 6 with a sentence ...

Hey, Connie! =D Sorry for the long wait. I have time to blow, so I thought I'd spend it critiquing; and my first items to critique are the ones I ...

Hey, Jigs! =D Grammar and First Impressions It'll be in the attachment. There's really not much to find in there, though. xD This was pretty fantastic, and I must applaud ...

Anyway, the story is going along swimmingly. Hahaha, Clo said "swimmingly." Hahaha... *clears throat* Connie! ^_^ Here's chapter 5's review as I've promised. :D Overall The others touched this point: ...

Hey, Connie! I'm finally here! =D I'll do the overall review here. I have the Grammar and First Impressions in the attachment. ^_^ First, I think we're a tad confused ...

Hi, Connie! Sorry for the late review. The past few days have been... weird. If I explained it here, it would be worth 50 points and I wouldn't even have ...

Hey, Kaila! Sorry I didn't get to this straight away. Yesterday was kind of a weird day for me. xD I did this during school, though, so hopefully this crit ...