JabberHut

Hiya, Doe! I apologize if some of this doesn't make sense. I gotta leave soon, and I want to get this review out of the way so I can move ...

Hi again! Thought I'd come back while I'm on break. ;D That was sad. Actually, that frustrated me. xD Logan is a problem. I almost want to say Logan went ...

Hiya, Kate! This is an excellent piece, I must say! You had my attention throughout the entire thing. It was extremely cute and one of those romances that makes the ...

Hi, Teddy! I found this a really cute story. xD It reminded me of the old-fashioned fairy tales and fables. I found a couple points though that are a bit ...

Hi, Derek! It's great to see you around and writing again. :D Prologue Just one concern. ^^ The words almost lifted off the page as she began to read. She ...

Hey, there! I saw your story and thought I'd give you some advice for Stella's contest. ^^ This story was epically cute. xD I love Cinderella, let alone fairytales, and ...

Galeeerius! You're an excellent poet if I haven't made that point clear yet. You always make me scratch my brain for something constructive (and I guess I come out with ...

Hey there! Well, I typed up a whole review and then somewhere along the line, I pressed a button that took me to a different page, thus losing the review. ...

Hi, Queenie! This is a very interesting poem. In fact, the emotion is brought out very well. We can definitely get a taste of what the speaker is feeling. Very ...

Hey, there! It's been a while since I visited the Lyrics section. Forgive me for any obscure comments, haha. First off, I'm going to try and guess the meaning of ...

Aww, this is cute! And it's non-fiction? I would love to hear the whole story. This is adorable. I kept doubting that this was real 'cause it seems to movie-ish! ...

Hey, Vernon! Let's see what I can come up with for you. I Can Has Grammar Check Plzkthxbai I'm going to skip a grammar check, but I think that's one ...

Hi there! How does it feel to have the first ever new-YWS-review by me? :D Grammar and First Impressions She looked beautiful even as she died. The wind rustled her ...

Back a third time! The opener paragraph was fantastic. xD So Claireborne made me laugh at the end. The ending was awesome. XD Beginning and ending are epic. The middle ...

Here I am again! So I read the first section and decided what's bothering me about Claireborne is the multi-personality issue. Allow me to explain: His dialogue runs too fast. ...