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Re: April is Script Frenzy Month!!
I'm also going to do this but, I have a question. Would it be alright for me to write a sequel to the movie "Cirque Du Freak: A vampire's Assistant" ...
Mar 29, 2010 -
Re: The Brethren's Child
Hello! :D I think you have a very neat idea. I love fantasy, and this idea is always very interesting for me to read. The whole priest magic, calling-on-the-gods thing ...
Mar 28, 2010 -
Re: The Locust King - Chapter 1
I'm here as I said I would be! Introduction Specifically the first sentence, it didn't hook me. It was boring and just... blurgh. "The worn-down, dark red pick-up" is quite ...
Mar 9, 2010 -
Re: The Greatest Show Off Earth
Galeeerius! So I'm finally here? Yeah. I did read this earlier! Like.. as soon as I got your PM! But after I read it once, I didn't understand it, so ...
Mar 5, 2010 -
Re: Hunters: Book 1: Purity
Hi, Kenzi! I actually made it now. :D Sorry for such a late arrival, but I was distracted by numerous things. Now I'm here, though I don't have much time. ...
Feb 15, 2010 -
Re: Bruised and Broken
Hey, Queenie! Seeing as this is non-fiction, this is quite sad and terrible. :( I hope that person's alright, and I hope you found some help. On to the review ...
Feb 15, 2010 -
Re: Swing Chapter 4
Hello! Forgive me, but I haven't read any of the previous chapters. I figure I'd see what I can do to help out with just this by itself though! And ...
Feb 9, 2010 -
Re: The Decoy Dream
Hiya, Sodypop! (Nickname? I think so. ;D) This was really cool! It's a really cool idea, and you've written this story so well! I don't really have anything big to ...
Feb 8, 2010 -
Re: It's Been You- Chapter 1 [still editing]
Hi, Poojaa! Lovely name, by the way. ;D I think you have an awesome MC to work with here. You seem to have an idea as to what you want ...
Feb 8, 2010 -
Re: Unfamiliar Ceilings
I'm here! Sorry for the wait, but I wanted to get a few things done and off my shoulders before tackling this for you! :D So I think your imagery ...
Feb 7, 2010 -
Re: My Purge Revised
Hello! I thought I'd stop by and read what you've posted, which I'm sure you won't mind. ;D Mkay, so I'm gonna just guess for no particular reason, and I ...
Feb 5, 2010 -
Re: The Laws of Time Chapter 1: Genesis
You are so cool. xD I love Doctor Who . One of my favorite TV shows! But I shall not let that get in the way of a fair review. ...
Jan 31, 2010 -
Re: Luna 2.2
Hi! So you're right! Without reading the previous parts, it was partially confusing! However, I still understood enough to know what's basically happening. And this is a very good thing. ...
Jan 31, 2010 -
Re: ?Not Good?
Hello! I've never been much of a poet, but I thought I'd at least leave a comment. :) Hmm... so to interpret what was going on through your head when ...
Jan 31, 2010 -
Re: The White Knight Chapter Nine Death and Rebirth
Hello! I've seen you posting for quite a while, so the least I could do is to comment on one of them! I didn't read the previous chapters to this, ...
Jan 31, 2010
