JabberHut

Hi, Jamie! I found this sitting around and I thought I'd pay a visit! :D Anticipation [s]coarsed [/s] coursed through her [s]exasted exhausted body[/s] veins , sending pulses of energy ...

Hello! ^^ Man, you're asking me to review after Jasmine, Gyr, and Via looked over it? LOL, they're crits will top mine. I'd bet almost anything! (My YWS account is ...

Hello! Thought I'd pay a visit. :) First of all, is there a way for you to adjust the font. It's a bit blinding and can scare off reviewers. We ...

Hello, Goth! Here upon request. :) I'm not a poet, so we'll see how well of a review I can give... Love is the thing that makes you crush , ...

Dino! Sorry it took a while, but I had other priorities. Anyway, here's the crit I promised. :D Allomorph, the master force in online world trading, banking, and technologies , ...

Here I am! So I don't forget, I'm totally gonna crit right here on the comp. That way I won't get in trouble for posting so late. :D The Sanctuary ...

Alright, came here as directed. :) Sorry it took so long, btw. I had plenty of distractions to keep me away from typing up this crit. :oops: Their master watched ...

Alrighty, I told you I had your critique sitting here. To prove it, I'm gonna type it up. :D Ugh, ugly font. :shock: That's probably a reason why people are ...

Hey! Sorry for the wait, got a bit...distracted. ^^; Feeling rather uncomfortable, the girl had dressed quickly before heading [s]down stairs[/s] downstairs to find her father talking at the door ...

Hey, man! Took me long enough, but I have the critique as promised. :) Then, [no comma] an anvil and a blacksmith appeared, hammering some sort of metal [s]appeared[/s]. The ...

Yay! It's your short story! ^^ She straightened his collar, rubbed her hands down his coat to get the dirt off, what ever she could to make him look nice. ...

Here we go! ^^ Two came from the back, [s]and they each held guns[/s] each holding a gun . The third man that had exited— the one from the passengers ...

Alright, let's see what I can do for you today. :twisted: Part 1 Finally, after a few more close turns—despite Brandon’s promise—the Black’s arrived at the spot. It was a ...

Hey, Ash. Let's see what I can do for you. :) Whisper pointed out a lot of things I would have, so this may not seem as big as it ...

Woo! Next part's up! Ruby followed quickly, [no comma] before rapidly transporting herself and the others to where Luke and Koichi were with a young man. Use stood or spoke ...