JabberHut

Hello, there! You must be new to YWS? Wonderful to meet you. :) Keep in mind there's some rules we like to follow to keep everything as organized as pleasant ...

Hello! Thought I'd stop by and answer your plea for a critique! :wink: “Alright class, I want you all to turn to one another and shake hands and welcome the ...

Hey, Blue Fairy! :) I had to stop my homework. It was giving me a headache, so I thought I'd give that crit I promised to do about...thirty minutes ago. ...

Hey, Kylan! It's about time I stopped by to more of your work. I hope I don't repeat anything in Gwen's really long crit up there. :shock: Lol, forgive me ...

Hey, Aedomir! I got your critique finished, so here it is: The sparkling water, cast upon the morning grass , began to gleam a flamboyant orange, [no comma?] as a ...

Hello, love! It's been so long! I don't do much with this kind of stuff, so we'll see what I can come up with. :twisted: For seven years , the ...

Hey, Aedomir! I have no idea why it took my longer than it should have to find this. I tend to pull those dumb instances once in a while, so ...

Hello, Church! I got your crit done, so here goes nothing! :D Prologue He Had Top-Secret code classification, but he was told this place made cleaning agents. Is there a ...

Gyr! Yay, something to review by you! And it’s quite the long one, so my critique shall be just as long. :twisted: The meeting was already underway, of course, and ...

Gyr! *pounces* It looks like you need someone to stop by and rip your story to shreds…:twisted: “Penny, you know better than that, [exclamation point or period] [s]how[/s] How many ...

Hello! I noticed I had a critique for you sitting around, so I thought I’d post it. :) A little different [s]then[/s] than last time we met -- she [s]seems[/s] ...

Hi! I saw this and thought I’d pay a visit. :) Had someone told Johnny that “Can you please take Sandra Tscarediway to 57 Rosebend Avenue?” was a question to ...

Oh em gee, hi! It’s been a long time! Thought I’d stop by to say hi and leave a critique behind. ^_^ I can hear her soft weeping beside me ...

Hey, Night! I saw your work and I thought I'd pay a visit. :) In the distance , you could hear a faint whimpering, almost as if it were a ...

Hi, Jamie! I found this sitting around and I thought I'd pay a visit! :D Anticipation [s]coarsed [/s] coursed through her [s]exasted exhausted body[/s] veins , sending pulses of energy ...