JabberHut

Hi, Easy! Sorry this is a little late, but I've been a little busy lately. ^^; Grammar and First Impressions The few moments he is gone, when I am free ...

Professor Rabbit! Thank you so much for entering the CIA contest! Here's your critique for entering. If there are any issues downloading the file, PM me. I'll be sure to ...

Heather! For your entering the contest, here is your bonus critique! I did all the critting in the Word Document. I apologize for any difficulties, and PM me if there ...

Rose! I felt like critting, and I decided to crit yours in the little time I have because you have a deadline to make. But I just noticed now that ...

Hello, Tadatori! :D I noticed your story here, and I thought I'd take a quick look here. ^^ Grammar and First Impressions Because it's so short, you'll get a good ...

Easy! A beautiful thing has happened this night— [colon instead] the storm clouds moved in. I don't much like this second line. It's very weak and elementary compared to the ...

Easy! The daemon claws [s]at the[/s] at the closed door, Gurgling noises escaping [s]from [/s]her mouth. I'm gonna go with Blink here. I don't entirely understand why gurgling is capitalized ...

Mantis! I made an attachment with my critique. I have all the details in there, so I do hope you find some of it valuable or to your liking. ^_^ ...

Grammar and First Impressions Jerome took a brief stroll through the crystalline soul of a major reptilian beast, sick with scurvy from lack of lake fronts to envelop. So that ...

Hi, Fire! I haven't critted in what seems like forever, so forgive me for anything that doesn't make sense. ^^ Grammar and First Impressions I pulled the fuzz off of ...

Brad! Grammar and First Impressions ...or else he'd be the little brother nobody remembered, and that was not happening. This was cute. xD Adults weren't always trustworthy, after all. Awesome. ...

Es ist meinen Bär! *hugs* Grammar and First Impressions That ghost, Lillian’s grandma or not, is hurting us.” Does that sound like something Richard would say? " It is hurting ...

:shock: ... ..... ... :shock: That was intense. [spoiler] Grammar and First Impressions This is a very general blah line-by-line. Mainly on commas. I can easily get more specific if ...

I was going to do this last night, but then my internet crashed. *cries* I'm feeling kinda bad right now, but I'm gonna crit like I said I would! *asks ...

3B! Haha, I'm gonna crit! I'm critting your work! :P You know you love me. :wink: Grammar and First Impressions Brianne and Roger both gasped , and Jen was frozen. ...