JaBurton

Thanks for reading this and giving feedback! I was wondering if you had a suggestion for the ending? When I wrote it, I did so to finish it since it's ...

Thanks for reading this and pointing that out!

Thanks! It was the 'but' that really through me off cause it changed the meaning, haha. I just had this workshopped in class today and your thoughts on it were ...

What you said kind of goes off on a tangent so I'm not sure if everything is directly applied to the essay, or if it's just a side note of ...

Ummm... what?

That's actually a rather good idea but I'm torn. I hadn't thought to add that at the end because I viewed the tail-back to the latex gloves as a wrap, ...

Oh, you're so nice. Thanks for this review and that suggestion. That was a line that's always bothered me but... I haven't really bothered to try and fix (my poetry ...

Thanks! I aim to make people smile with my (kind of) morbid humor. This makes me very happy that you liked this! Thanks.

Thanks! I know that first part is still confusing a bit and am working on that. I'm happy you like that simile since it was one of my favorite lines ...

Thanks for the positive feedback. It makes it worth putting up here.

Cool. These were just examples, not specific necessities anyways.

I was putting this up and realized this was the one with the typos in it. At first I panicked, then I read the submitted version and was like, "Whew, ...

Yeah. These sentence errors will be fixed the moment I have the time to comb through. :) Thanks for pointing them out though. As for the length of time being ...

Lots of people enjoy short prologues, so I understand how you could be a little put off by the "fluff". That being said, the fluff needs to be here for ...

You are thorough... Thanks!