JOV97

Thank you very much for sharing your thoughts! It is part of the first chapter of my novel - I'm unsure whether I'll post more though as I just want ...

Thank you for the review! I will definitely take what you've said and use it to improve my work :)

Thank you very much, you're too kind! :)

Thank you for your thoughts, they really mean a lot! Advice taken on board :)

Nice to hear your thoughts - glad to hear you enjoyed it, and I'll look at editing the work now based on your suggestions. Thanks so much! JOV :P

Thanks so much for all your reviews! You've given me some really great ideas on how I can make this piece more immersive for the reader. I will definitely consider ...

Three different names? Sorry if I caused any confusion there, the only two characters are Danny and his father Samuel. Thanks anyway for your review, it's great to hear other ...

haha! No intention for the JK Rowling similarity - I suppose I'll take it as a compliment! As you may have figured out, this is an earlier draft of the ...

Thanks for your thoughts - all taken on board! And this is the second part of the first chapter, not one chapter in itself! Hopefully there'll be more to come. ...

thanks, you most definitely did help! After reading your comment on the first couple of lines, I see your point - I will definitely look into changing that to make ...

Ahh! Thank you! Sorry if I was unclear; this is the second part of the first chapter (there is more in this chapter to follow). We are later told more ...

Thank you for reviewing! And it didn't seem lazy at all. All advice taken on board as usual!

Thank you so much for your review! I'm terribly sorry to reply so late - I think I had some problems with the site's notification system! I've taken your suggestions ...

I don't hate you at all - your advice was all really helpful! :P I've edited my version based on your suggestions. I knew the part after "wing mirror" wasn't ...

Advice taken on board - I will hopefully be posting more tidbits soon; I'll let you know more if/when I do. Thanks!