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Hey, Kate! First off, I really like this. You've got some good quality writing here. My only comment is that the characters thoughts don't really sound like her. If she's ...

It's really funny exactly how seamless this is. I can't even tell who wrote what. Scary, actually. The only thing that I can think of now (because we've revised this ...

A rival lord had beaten her until her bones cracked and splintered, piercing through her bruised flesh like serrated fangs through diseased gums. I like the sentence, but I think ...

Well, this story is all well and fine, but I think you should write more romance. Why doesn't the librarian fall head over heels for this devilishly charming young ink ...

"The rest of the class had noticed this, and were busy making paper aeroplanes, passing notes of their own, and basically not listening to a word that was being said ...