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Re: How saccharine sweet blood can be (Eliza’s origin) (Chapters 2-3)
Okay, this has a LOT going for it. It feels like the beginning of a mystery where the reader knows something is wrong before Eliza fully understands what it is. ...
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Re: PUPPETEER
The repeated “Puppeteer, puppeteer” gives it this trapped, controlled feeling that fits the whole poem really well. I especially like the ending. “The strings are finally cut loose” ties the ...
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Re: numb
This feels really raw and real. I like how almost every line is a question—it makes it feel like the speaker is genuinely lost and searching for answers. Some of ...
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Re: Steam Engine
This poem beautifully captures the chaotic reality of urban life. The image of "dandelion seeds" floating like "ghostly gems" suggests fleeting beauty and the anticipation of change. The contrast betw
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