JC

Oh wow. Shadow, you made me blush. I'm going to take that as a compliment if you don't mind. =D -JC

Thank you very much Nightmare =D -JC

How old was the girl? I thought she was younger than seven...but I guess I was wrong. It just kind-of confuzed me unitl the story wasn't scary anymore. Good writing ...

(merci= french for thank you) No need to apologize. =D

Merci Nightmare

Clau- Personally, I haven't read any Anne Rice, I tried but...I just couldn't. Sorry. But yeah, I saw the typos...like I said...eww. lis. As for what she's in, she doesn't ...

Thanks. I'm trying to make this as uncliched as possible, so there wont be any garlic. Crosses and holy water though, but only as torture. ;D. I noticed that I ...

Yeah, I get it. I've changed some things from what I've told you, and I'm hoping that it'll end up better. =D thanks for the help Clau! -JC

This wasn't bad. Like others said, you switched tenses a lot. I don't entirely get it though...the game I sounds cool, but I don't understand. =D oh well. Good writing ...

This chapter is COMPLETE =D See chapter 2! =D thank you for reading! -JC

I would love help =D, Thanks Clau

Night Mistress- Part three is posted =D

I've re-written this chapter.

What is Jaime doing? Backing off and being a complete sissy about life thinking that she deserves more pity than anybody else in the world. I guess I've always kind-of ...

Je ne sais quoi is french for "I don't know"