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Re: Four of Breaking
CRIT FOR THREE Yay, I finally get to finish this =D Okay, so, the third...instalation...I guess would be the word. It was good, I love the relationship between Taj and ...
Jun 4, 2007 -
Re: "Double Dad"--- Chapter 6
Short. Sweet. And to the point. It was sad. ...that's about it for me...
Jun 4, 2007 -
Re: Past Forgiven Part 1
I don't depends on my mood I guess...next time I get really depressed I will
Jun 4, 2007 -
Re: Four of Breaking
Crit for Two: split by a broad smile which lit her whole face all the way into eyes which sparked with laughter as her blonde friend talked away at her. ...
Jun 3, 2007 -
Re: Past Forgiven Part 1
I'm working on POD...just having a very busy week is all! I should post some today, so...yeah. And I know this is very, very cliche...but it's a topic that means ...
Jun 3, 2007 -
Re: The Something Beneath the Stairs, No. 2
Well, it't not that it isn't realistic, just that it seemed weird how automatically comfortable the Nicholas was at annabelle's house, I guess it's his nature, and it says that, ...
Jun 2, 2007 -
Re: POD 30:2 -Ortega
haha, not really, after this is 33 (however many of them there are), then 30:3, 34, 30:4, 35...then normal...I think...
Jun 1, 2007 -
Re: POD 20- The weirdest things
Keep reading. She doesn't get sent for man slaughter, sorry if I said that. Instead it's greivous bodily harm, and she's being sued. (all of this is mentioned later.) Are ...
May 31, 2007 -
Re: POD 18- Accidental Confessons
She would be happy, if she had meant to hurt him, instead of just get him off of her. Maybe I should make that clearer....
May 31, 2007 -
Re: POD 15- Finally Free
Oops...*Changes to italics...* Thanks =D
May 31, 2007 -
Re: POD 12- Side Effects
I'm going to add to this chapter, it's on my to do list. But if I had, I wouldn't have been able to post it here. Small price to pay ...
May 31, 2007 -
Re: POD 9- A fate worse than falling
Well, have you ever seen somebody go down the stairs so fast you thought for sure they would fall? They used their body velocity to go faster...well...that's considered "throwing yourself ...
May 31, 2007 -
Re: POD 6- Scaring Love Away
Yeah...it's one of my things I've gotta work on. I just can't seem to add that kind of thing without it seeming cheesy or unreal....
May 31, 2007 -
Re: POD 5- Comfort of the blade- on both accounts.
It's possible to get a blade from a shaving razor, I've done it (tested it to make sure it would work here). Of course, I used pliers and a hammer... ...
May 31, 2007 -
Re: POD 8- Patterns that look like swirls...
That's parts coming, but right now Jamie doesn't know what his motives are, she can only guess. I want to put the reader in the same boat, so to speak.
May 31, 2007