IzumiRyuichi

Well, I must say this is a very good poem and I liked how you worded it. I do have a little problem with it also. Closet dwelling octopus Shadow ...

Hello Destiny, I have a quick review for you. First, try to put a little more effort into this. Its very good, but I'm noticing lots of uncapitolized words, nonspacing, ...

Well hello writewannabe. My name is Ryuichi and I just joined YWS. I read this story and found it to be great! I just have a couple of grammar mistakes ...

Wow, this is a very good novel you have begun. I do have a couple of things I think I would have changed. First, try to give more information on ...

Well bravo to this poem. I like the how you made this poem short and easy. Even thought there wasn't much detail added, it made sence. A little more should ...

Hey Aries nice job on the poem. I personally think this is a great poem but without the amount of detail I would like. It seems as if the poem ...

Very good story Aries. I liked how the story started off with action but I think you brought it a little to quickly. A few little grammar mistakes here and ...

Wow. I am deeply stunned at this work. The detailing was phenomenal and every word gave me a picture in my mind. I'm not the best critic so I can't ...