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That was a really good chapter. Although it took me a while to figure out that they were living underwater..... But that was the only thing I saw beside in ...

Very good poem. It's very true that the light holds all our fear. Sorry I can't really give you any spelling help if there is a word misspelled I can't ...

Well, it's good. I loved it very much. I can tell you have talent at writing. Everything flowed beautifully together and I didn't see any problem with grammar or anything ...

Very good poem. It's true for most of the world too. "Solders falling After so long The kings are crawling" these three lines are the best part (in my opinion). ...

love the poem. in a way it's mysterious and cold, then it gets a calm and safe mood. love it :D keep on writing those poems buddy!!!

really good poem. i"m not the best at reviewing other peoples work but.... this is a nice poem about love killing slowly. "The love is fast and widely spread And ...