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Re: Two symphonies
I recognize this. Is this based off the anime Fairy Tail? Because this sounds exactly like that, save for a few name changes. There's even a character named Laxus, who's ...
Jul 9, 2013 -
Re: Invisible
I loved this story. The girl is very relatable, and is emotionally packed without being too short. I don't have any recommendations for improvement, because the truth is nothing can ...
Jul 9, 2013 -
Re: Concaptivus - prologue
This seems like it has a lot of potential. The setting seems great, and I hope you continue it. I have no real critiques, other than a warning: try to ...
Jul 9, 2013 -
Re: A Fresh Start
Great story. You have very good pacing, which is rare for most writers. I would enjoy if you could divulge, or just give a bit more background. It's obviously an ...
Jul 9, 2013 -
Re: Small Tortures
Cute little snippet. I enjoyed it. Nice job.
Oct 17, 2012 -
Re: His Butler, Phantom Image #2
I loved it. Sebastian seemed a little out of character for a moment there, but you recovered nicely. I like the twist you put on it. Nice story, I absolutely ...
Jul 14, 2012 -
Re: Hand in Hand
How did you know about my ex-boyfriend? Just kidding, I've never had a boyfriend. Anyways, my terrible jokes aside, this was very very good. The beginning was very suspenseful and ...
Jul 14, 2012 -
Re: New York
This seems very interesting. I liked the description of the hobo, he actually reminds me of one of my old teachers. I liked it so far and would really love ...
Jul 14, 2012 -
Re: Vacation
Very interest short story. Her boss seems like a jerk, which only makes me like it more. It also gave me a great idea. I wonder if my friends would ...
Jul 14, 2012 -
Re: The Land of Despair Issue #1 Script
This is very interesting. But I'm curious. Are you am artist planning to turn this into a comic book or do you plan on having someone else do that? Or ...
Jul 14, 2012
