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Re: Perceptions
I am Ishan and I am here to review your work. Here we go; First of all, here at YWS we are very particular about English. Example; we don't use ...
Oct 11, 2014 -
Re: Afterlife
Hi Raven Lord, I am Ishan and I am here to review your short story. So here we go ; Your story was just fantastic. Hats off a million times ...
Oct 9, 2014 -
Re: The Old Beech Tree
Hi Raven Lord, I am Ishan and I am here to review your short story. So here we go; You have written a fantastic short story. Your theme was very ...
Oct 9, 2014 -
Re: Bumble Bee
It is a nice poem but I would admit that the poem was not humorous. By just adding 'Hee hee! Ha ha! Ha ha, he he!' the poem does not ...
Oct 8, 2014 -
Re: Lily
You have written a fantastic poem describing the lily. The way by which you use the language is just fabulous. I think that your poem was similar to Wordsworth poem ...
Oct 7, 2014 -
Re: save the books!
I did not like your poem. We should not compose poems on some less intelligent people who don't follow the rules of grammar. There are always intelligent people who know ...
Oct 7, 2014