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Sorry I didn't explain, Socks! :) The father isn't eating because he cannot afford a meal. All he does is for his son because he loves him. Makes sense? I ...

Hi Cameron! I really enjoyed reading your story! It made me feel as if I was in Ancient China. I really liked the characters. You really seemed to understand the ...

Hello Phillip, I really enjoyed your story. It really made me feel as if I was in Ancient China. However, I would do some grammar corrections and capitalization corrections. Overall ...