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Re: While I Scampered Across The Street
This is a cool project. In the beginning I "feared" you would continue with the extremely repetetive structure, but I really liked the end of the first paragraph. And after ...
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Re: The Complulsive
I liked it really much. This is an original piece and I love the topic. You describe the main character so good, that I can see him before my inner ...
Nov 14, 2014 -
Re: The melting of Ted Turner's Lawn
This is absolutely brilliant! You way with words is just admirable. Amazing how you describe everything without it seeming too overloaden with describtion and information. I also like the fact ...
Nov 14, 2014 -
Re: Suck it up (I can't)
This is really cool! I really like the topic you chose for this, it has a strong message. I especially like the first stanza. It really evoked feelings. I'd love ...
Nov 14, 2014 -
Re: Sometimes
This is an amazing poem! I really like it. I can relate to it very well. The last sentence is wonderful, and in a way sad and comforting at the ...
Nov 14, 2014