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Re: Because You Don’t See Me
Deffinitly one of the best angsty "he loves me not" poems i've ever had the pleasure of reading XD On a more serious note, I loved the way you phrased ...
Oct 20, 2011 -
Re: My Weird Life
First off - this made me laugh so much I think its better suited to Comedy Short Stories (but that's just me personally). Good grammar and structure, it flowed nicely ...
Oct 16, 2011 -
Re: The Realisation
I'm gonna assume this is during WW2? Nice little piece, simple and straight-forward, pretty good grammar over all -BUT I think that there isn't supposed to be a comma between ...
Oct 16, 2011 -
Re: Xenomorph
I am going to tell you this how I was told (by my uber-awesome at grammar and spelling and such cousin Nikita naturally) years ago and you WILL take this ...
Sep 17, 2011 -
Re: A howler from Mars
*bows down* That's it, I officially acknowledge you as pure epicness! Welcome to the club :DD Loved the idea, made me laugh, i'm sure there were grammar mistakes in there ...
Sep 17, 2011