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  • Poetry » Realistic, Humor Re: A Line

    Review train coming through! This story is hilarious and funny, but only one thing makes it wrong. This seems like a short story rather than a poem. A poem isn't ...

    Jun 17, 2013
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Narrative Re: Disrecover

    Hey! Review train coming through. I could feel great power and word combination in your stanzas, but they were getting me a bit off track. I really couldn't tell where ...

    Jun 17, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Teen Fiction Re: First Dimension: Chapter 1

    I'm here to take on a review on your post, so here I go! Your story right off the bat has errors I'd like to point out. You have question ...

    Jun 14, 2013


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