InspiredLight

Hiya, first off I would like to say that you are very good at depicting scenes and describing what you want to say. Secondly, I would like to know more ...

Coming from someone who isn't much into the whole "space" thing, this is amazing. It has just the right amount of action to keep you interested! I couldn't stop reading. ...

Let me start off by saying, this is very well written. The only problems I have is that maybe the running around the questions and what the characters are saying ...

This was a well-written short story. You can describe what you are imagining in your own head very well and it shows in your work. the only thing I would ...

This is well written, I like how you used a play on this story to make it understood the hostility between the mother and daughter. I also like how you ...