InkAndPaper

Hello, Inky here! Your story is a little long, but I was able to read through it! But let me tell you, it was not easy. xD First off, let ...

Your story is very fun and exciting to read! There's lots of battles and the characters are entertaining! Sometimes, it's nice to read a light-hearted story. The dialogue in this ...

I think this is an interesting topic, I don't usually see characters with powers like Flo's or her mother's. I'm curious about their powers because I want to see their ...

I actually love these types of stories, because the supernatural element makes me think 'what if?' It really sparks my imagination. Just make sure your tenses are correct. You wrote, ...

The characters are good, they have fears and weaknesses just like anyone else. Too many people fall into the trap of creating a perfect character, when nobody's perfect. Also, I ...