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  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Death takes it all

    A very beautiful poem. The rhyme scheme really works and the poem has a great flow to it. And somehow it evokes some intense imagery without any description, which I ...

    May 23, 2010
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Death Walked in the Door

    First off, a really great poem. I enjoyed it. It seems very similar to scene from No Country for Old Men , but with a twist. That also explains the ...

    May 23, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Popsicles

    My first thought upon reading this was that if May is this hot where you are, I would not like to experience July. I didn't notice anything negative about this ...

    May 23, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: I Don't Want to Die

    I apologize in advance for any mess ups in my review, this is my first one. I don't have many notes for improvement, but this paragraph here: I know it’s ...

    May 23, 2010


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